Why is this my life?
Whoever said it's me?
Or is reality just a cruel and wishful destiny?
If tomorrow I'm gone I can't even tell you
how much I love you.
And now you'll never believe it.
I am weak, and my mind must die.
I'm so sorry I've put you through this.
I'm sorry I'm not stronger.
I'm sorry I just can't let myself stay.
Most of all I'm sorry I broke your heart.
....."one last kiss for you" :(
4 comments:
I still love your work, even though 99.9% of it is depressing...
I've been reading your poems for about two years. And i can only name a few inspirations. (:
soo, i can't really criticize poetry cause it speaks differently to everyone. but! what i think of them are: that the first three lines, especially, of "If i am to die" really say a lot about what you think of your life. and "Fixing the loss" and "The day they should come" both show your personality, the guilt you harbor, and the self consciousness you have in a way. i love the way you show yourself in your poetry, it's rare these days. also the way you word certain phrases like in "You never really know" it'd be simple, except for, like in all your work, you can tell you're intellectual so it has valuable meaning. soo, before this gets to be a novel, i'll wrap it up by saying... whatever muse you have in your life, don't ever lose it.
One of my less recent favorites, by the way, is "A Place" (:
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